Rather than posting new sentences asking “is that correct”, it might be more helpful if you state which part of the sentence you think is incorrect. That way, somebody can explain the relevant grammar.
And in what way do you want the sentence to be improved? Ids this a hypothetical question about grammatical structure, or do you want the actual content of that sentence rephrased?
Both wrong I’m afraid, John. What you’re saying there is that the cow-orkers are more aware of office politics than they are of me/us (and so in the first example, it would have to be ‘me’ rather than ‘I’). In other words, “they know lots about office politics, but they don’t know much about us”.
There’s nothing wrong with ending a sentence with a verb. To be honest, I can’t see anything wrong with Mikey’s original sentence, and I am a grammar überpedant.
Nope … that changes the meaning and indicates that we are thanking all cow-orkers, because all cow-orkers are more aware of office politics than we are.
Leaving the comma out means that we are only thanking the cow-orkers who are more aware of office politics than we are, and we’re not thanking the dopey ones who don’t know what’s going on.