Please keep in mind it is the first drawing im quite happy with it havnt tried to draw anything better than a lame stick figure for about 9 years while it needs work im happy with it
Instructors Feedback:
think about what your trying to achieve while drawing the lines
EDIT: sorry also meant to ask on feedback with improving.
Overall, a nice look. I’d personally extend the snout a little, but that’s just my personal opinion…
That would be my personal opinion too but i started with the legs and then went around to do the back and done the snout last.
Thank you dave
looks nice but didn’t understand what it mean 
Good starting work! No one can make a professional and eye catching sketch in a first attempt… Try is the best thing to get new and creative ideas… Keep it up!
