markjans — 2013-11-15T12:32:43-05:00 — #1
About 2 months ago a company in The Netherlands asked me to design a salespage for their new product. I'm almost done with the design, I already converted the design to HTML. But I'm pretty sure that there is still a lot to improve. I really want to make a good impression to this client because I know there is a lot more work to do.
What I had in mind when I started with the design:
- The first impression should give a short overview of the product
- There should be a CTA (Call To Action) above default
- Things should be clean
- Not too much text
- Guiding design with a step by step process
- Building trust with testimonials and trusted logos
LIVE PREVIEW: https://www.keywordmarketingpro.com/services/forum-domination
I really appreciate if a few good designers can give me a few tips to improve my design and make it better!
Also open to better CSS solutions.
Thank you guys!
moretea — 2013-11-15T14:31:58-05:00 — #2
Nice, but have you given any thought to responsive design? (Or maybe that's not a criterion...)
markjans — 2013-11-18T04:48:50-05:00 — #3
Yea, that's a good one!
simply_ryan — 2013-11-18T05:29:01-05:00 — #4
Nice looking site - clean with a modern tech look and gets to the point straight away. The only (minor) issue that I have with it is in the text "Forum Domination May Be The Only Thing You Need" - it will be one of the tools they might need (and a very useful one at that!) but it's unlikely to be the only one as there is social media, SEO, email marketing etc to think of too. As a buyer that could raise my suspicions as it seems too good to be true. Otherwise great looking page!
autopaypalboost — 2013-11-20T04:19:12-05:00 — #5
Keyword marketing is a nice site with a good niche also I love your site.
995amit — 2013-11-20T04:19:19-05:00 — #6
The look and feel of the site is impressive. You have done an amazing job here. Guiding step by step, short info, color and layout of your site impress me a lot.
Do some work on your SEO so that people find you by Google, Bing and other search engines. You can also provide your social networking profile.
Overall the first impression was awesome. Best wishes for your future.
john_betong — 2013-11-25T01:26:08-05:00 — #7
The site looks nice but while it takes a long time to load the user is presented with a blank screen.
I dread to think what it would be like to use on a mobile.
shariarkhabir179 — 2013-11-27T05:33:46-05:00 — #8
I don't have enough knowledge to judge the page exactly. I am pretty new in this field and learning. Still I can say that you have done pretty good job.
leimowei — 2013-11-27T09:53:57-05:00 — #9
like your website, i think keywords marketing has a great niche
pbambu — 2013-12-04T05:48:08-05:00 — #10
Hi there! Your design seems really nice and it makes an excellent first impression.
A couple of suggestions to further improve it:
- the page is somewhat slow to load. Since you have several images that are loaded separately, why don't you combine them into a sprite?
- the "SEE PLANS AND PRICING" button could be improved. The font does not seem to scale very weel to that size, and maybe if it was not capitalized it would look better.
Anyway, congratulations on a great design!
k0210561 — 2013-12-06T07:04:55-05:00 — #11
That was nice website, look very professional.Good landing page.
I like your style of seo service.
darrick67 — 2013-12-06T21:08:57-05:00 — #12
The website is very simple and clean, but I think you can change it again typesetting
ynakasone — 2013-12-06T23:18:57-05:00 — #13
Very fast and clean, but I don't like to much information on 1 page.
chris77 — 2013-12-09T13:52:01-05:00 — #14
Over all it looks good, but I'm not one for the oversized icons, they look childish, but without them, just plain trext, it's easier to become uninterested in the site. The center icon is a silhouette of what? You have a lot of validation errors, including "line 166 column 8 - Error: The center element is obsolete. Use CSS instead."
system — 2013-12-09T14:03:39-05:00 — #15
its work very fast and its cleaning is too fast. i will simply say that you have done a good job.. keep it up..
kellogss — 2013-12-17T14:09:32-05:00 — #16
As you stated, this website is professional and clean. However, the only thing that I have to point out is the menu font right next to the title. I think it would be better if you switch fonts or make it bold since it's too thin and it gets "hard" to read. Once again, just my personal opinion. Other than that, keep it up
mittineague — 2014-09-12T20:49:55-04:00 — #17
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